Okayyy so Vinathi here. I am editing Cookiesweet’s script. I’m going to redden whatever changes I make to the script so you know what I edited. This is entirely copied&pasted from Cookiesweet except for those few changes. I do not plan to shorten the script, just possibly lengthen it. NOTE**THESE ARE JUST IDEAS. THIS WILL NOT BECOME THE OFFICIAL SCRIPT UNLESS APPROVED BY COOKIESWEET (and if she doesn’t like the ideas she may change them back). Oh, also, can there only be 4 souls? Also, I corrected some grammar mistakes and missing words
I’ve got script done!! It’s kinda long so could you edit it a bit to make it shorter but don’t lose the storyline.
Alice in Nevermore! Script written by c00kiesweet99
Characters:
Bob, the Dungeon Master (We’ve got him alr)
The old lady who offers Alice the mirror
4 souls in Nevermore- STAY IN NEVERMORE UNTIL ALICE DEFEATS BOB.
1 kind soul in the Mindnight Café STAY IN Midnight CAFÉ UNTIL ALICE DEFEATS BOB.
2 Friends, Tristy and Tania
[A house with thousands of mirrors could you do an effect for that please??]
Alice: OMG I AM SO BORED!!! Check out that girls outfit! She looks gorgeous! Oh wait, that’s me! Hey, there I am again! This place is Heaven 😀
Friend 1 (Her name is Tania): Why don’t we go for a cup of coffee? All these you’s are starting to creep me out
Alice: And leave my wonderful reflection here all by itself?
Tania: I’ll pay
Alice: Alright! [TO HER REFLECTION] Bye,me! See you soon! [This is kinda like comedy on how vain she is]
[At Buzz]
[Alice, Tania and Tristy (Friend 2) are sitting down and sipping coffee, they make short small talk, and they leave and go separate ways for shopping]
[Alice is in Soho to shop for a dress]
[After several dresses]
Alice: OMG this one’s perfect! It shows off my eyes! Of course, I’m beautiful with or without this AMAZING dress. Oohh I have to have it! These eyes won’t show off themselves! How much is it? [sees price] Wow that’s a lot.
Well no one’s around maybe I could leave without anyone seeing
[ Alice leaves shop and outside an old woman stops her and gives her a mirror.]
Alice: AH! I’M SORRY! I’M TOO PRETTY FOR JAIL! Oh.. hi
Old woman: We all know how pretty you are, but Let’s see how honest you are, eh?
[Then POOF she disappears]
[Alice goes home with her friends, changed out of the dress and with the dress stuffed in her bag and sees them off,then she takes the mirror out (you forgot the word out when you were writing the script) of of her handbag- could Alice carry a messanger bag?? to examine it.]
Alice:Hmm..it’s rather nice…what’s this?” (On the back of the mirror is an inscription)
Alice [reading from the inscription, close up on the mirror]: Tell a lie in front of me and you shall never walk the Earth again
Alice: Blah blah. I’m the prettiest girl ever. Is that a lie?!
[nothing happens]
Alice: YES! I KNEW IT!
Tristy: A lie-detecting mirror? Yeah right. It’s just a normal mirror
Alice: Maybe it’s just a mirror with good judgement 😉
[stuffs in messenger bag]
Tania: Wait what was that in your bag?
Alice: What?
Tania: There’s a dress in there!
Alice: No there isn’t.
[POOF, Alice disappears to Nevermore] ( Oh, sorry I changed the whole mirror lie thing. Fine. You can change it back if you want, cookie, but I’m too lazy to right now. )
Alice: OMG-what is this place?!
Some random imprisoned soul: This is Nevermore! It’s called that because once you step in, nevermore will you get out….unless you sacrifice a soul to Bob,the spirit of the mirror and keeper of dungeon but it’s not so easy,he must WANT the spirit in the first place… and he is awfully fussy
[Alice shakes her head in disbelief and runs to Bob the Dungeon Master of Skeleton Key Dungeon ]
Alice: OMG!! YOU’VE GOTTA GET ME OUTTA HERE!! PLEASE!! I KNOW I TOLD A LIE AND I REGRET THAT!! RELEASE ME!!!!!!!!!
Bob: Ah,I knew you couldn’t resist trying my little mirror..you see I am the spirit of the mirror and every soul I capture does not appease me to be a sacrifice for me to eat but you do…
Alice:AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
4th soul: Did he want to eat you as a meal?
Alice: Yeah..why are you smiling like that…?
2nd imprisoned soul: If he eats you, he lets us go free, I’ve been here for 500 years my dear, I hunger to go back to the mortal world…and the only way is for him to have a soul for a meal. (this doesn’t make sense because how did they all end up together at the same time if this was true?)
2nd imprisoned soul: I’ve been here for 500 years my dear, I hunger to go back to the mortal world…and I think you may be the key.
Alice: Wha?
3rd soul imprisoned soul (like another one) She could kill Bob. Unfortuantely,he is made of shadow and darkness and is therefore invincible..
The first soul: It’s not an option so either we kill the girl or let her be food to Bob If we kill the girl, Bob won’t be pleased but if what he wants is killed, he dies.. and no-one will be in his clutches again! I say we kill her!
2nd,3rd and 4th soul:YEAH! [They chase her]
[Alice runs like crazy towards to that gateway that brings you to Wonderland.She fails.]
[She runs to the Midnight café and hides, amazingly,she still has the mirror]
Alice [praying] Please please get me out of here!!![nothing happens]
A kind soul: Apart from the 2 ways to get out, there is one more: Fight Bob and make him swear not to use the mirror again,make him swear on the River Styx!! Or better still,KILL HIM. (Sorry I edited this out, but in your version it seems kind of useless for him to say that because Alice doesn’t actually do that)
Kind soul: Alice, you don’t have to die. You can go after Master Bob. He’s not invincible. But let me warn you, if you get eaten by him, you will stay here, which is worse than death.
Alice : Ok, how do I fight him?
Kind soul: Opal Mist
Alice:WHAT?!
Kind soul: It’s a rare material,the only one capable of harming Bob. I had a knife crafted out of it a long time ago..take it and good luck. (I’m not sure if we can find a knife on ourworld, but maybe we can find something else. Idk. If all else fails, I’ll just edit. Or maybe the mirror can be her special weapon, and she can beat Bob to death with it.. LOL that would be funny XD)
[Alice is now facing Bob, she holds out the knife and Bob looks surprised] [Souls are still off looking for her]
Bob: Where did you get that?
Alice: You would should worry more about me more than where I got it.
[The fight begins, Alice tries to stab him but Bob dodges and shoots her with darkness *WTH?!* Alice clutches her arm,in pain but still has some strenght left, while Bob thinks he’s won, she stabs in straight down into his heart.]
Alice: Now we just must get home.
[all souls come and are surprised to see bob’s body on the floor]
Souls1-4: WE’RE FREE
Kind soul: I knew you could do it, Alice.
Alice: Thanks
Souls1-4: How do we get back home?
Alice: I think I know. [takes out dress she stole] Ask me where I got this from
[they ask, she tells the truth]
[Nevermore melts away and Alice returns to her house. From then on, she was always modest, kind and HONEST. And she never, EVER told a lie again. She returns the dressThe end]
Moral of the story: Be honest! [Add this at the end of the movie]